I meant to finish these before my vacation, but better late than never!
You can see the rest of the illustrations for this story here!
You can see that I've scheduled this segment to begin on September 22. I'm hoping that I'll succeed in getting my new edition ready by then: the complete book -- with all the illustrations and an ISBN -- that you can either buy as an e-book or order (reasonably priced) physical copies. We'll see if I can get it done in time! :D